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  • General Articles Re: The Boy Next Door(1)

    A/N: My brother is going to graduate from college in the next year, so I've had the idea of writing a book for him. Constructive critisim would be appreciated. I ...

    Mar 31, 2010
  • General Articles Re: My Intrest In Writing (needs help on conclusion!)

    I belong walking the halls of the Alabama School of Fine Arts; that is the place where I can turn my fantasies into realities and goals into achievements. I hope ...

    Jan 17, 2010
  • Scripts Re: deleted

    Even in scripts, the beginning is supposed to pull the reader, or audience in this case, into the story. I could only read 'til Max comes in. (1) The exchange ...

    Jan 17, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Haikus (2)

    Thank you both so much for your reviews! I'm now finished with haikus and the next challenge is rondeaus...don't know how that's going to work out. I guess we'll see ...

    Jan 17, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Bunch of Haikus

    I have finally made the few changes everyone has suggested! Thank you all for your time and reviews!

    Jan 17, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Haikus (2)

    Thanks to everyone who reviewed my first set of poems! Unto the next set! The Day: (1) Morning Majestic day breaks Shining crown rests upon land Gorgeous majesty (2) Noon ...

    Jan 17, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Bunch of Haikus

    Two more reviews! You guys are awesome! I will take in all ideas and fix my haikus when school decides not to hate me X/. Thanks! MJ

    Jan 12, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Bunch of Haikus

    I'd like to thank everyone for reviewing my haikus. I will keep your comments in mind when I get back to the others I have written...school has gotten in the ...

    Jan 11, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Bunch of Haikus

    The blurbs in italics are my inspiration for each haiku, just in case you were wondering. I'm sure everyone knows what a haiku is but just in case: A Japanese ...

    Jan 3, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: I am more of ink than solid stuff.

    Whoa. Your poem is probably everything I've been trying to do in my poems, like trying to get an idea out that makes sense in an elegant way or actually ...

    Jan 3, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Aja, Aja

    Woot! First post! My Biology I class just finished giving presentations on different diseases and their symptoms and treatments, and I remembered what jaundice is! Not that you care, but ...

    Dec 10, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: The YWS 2009 Yearbook

    Wow, I've been so inactive (I have a major procrastination problem) that the only thing I can write is this: Moon loves roon for loving Moon for loving roon for ...

    Dec 9, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: Usergroup Favorites?

    What's your favorite part of your user group? What features do you think are helpful or fun? I need to know because I'm thinking about starting a user group and ...

    Dec 1, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: Happy Thanksgiving!

    So full... X(

    Nov 30, 2009
  • Writing Tutorials Re: Building A Story

    This really helps. I create many plots, but never follow through with them since I don't know how to piece them together. Great work! Thanks!

    Nov 26, 2009


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